Class 06 – Final presentation (2019B)

Date

02 April 2020

Classroom

Zoom

Please find the final assignment in the Google shared folder.

After the presentation, you can enter the survey to choose two of your favorite animations in the class.

Survey results

We have 39 responses from the survey. Please find the summary of the survey with the popularity of individual animations and the comments from classmates.

Group 4 – One Night Meow (19 votes)

One Night Meow

Good

1. really smooth and hilarious storytelling
2. Cat is cute
3. clear story and kept a constant framerate
4. The way using color to show emotions
5. The scenes of the animation and the changing of colours are smooth and the cat is cute!
6. high completeness
7. I choose it as my most favorite animation because I think the story is expressed in a relaxed and happy way. I enjoyed watching it. They depicted the details and every emotion of the cat. The whole animation is very coherent. The style is very united throughout the animation. It is especially hard when they choose computer drawing to make an animation and they did a good job.
8. Meaningful
9. Good choice of music as the music help a lot in creating the atmosphere.
10. very good idea
11. The colors of the cat are changing interestingly and logically.
12. the changing of colors of the cat, and the style used
13. The theme of it fits the current social issue and they use a fun way to express the situation of the people in the whole world.
14. The combination of drawing and real photo background
15. colorful animation and fun to watch

Improvements

1. the color of the cat has switched to many times
2. add even more motions
3. Avoid instance change of colors
4. The time of each slide show could be better, like some slide could stay longer.
5. As what Peter has said, the animation would be more interesting if they can add the habits of a cat rather than being too humanoid.
6. the scenes move a bit too fast, if have longer time it would be better.
7. I think the scene of the cat drinking sanitizer can be slower.
8. More detail
9. the background can be more simple
10. I cannot think of.
11. maybe some more details on the reasons of the cat actions?
12. The cat might not be the most suitable figure if they use human it may be better since human is the one who suffered in the virus.

Group 8 – Origin of Life (17 votes)

Origin of Life

Good

1. great for using the fruits to present your work.
2. I like the way they present and the colour combination is very great!
3. I like the idea of using the fruits to make the videos, I particular like the reversing frame back to original vegetable and fruits.
4. The story is interesting. Stop motion with fruits is really funny and creative. The music and sound effect suit the animation a lot.
5. The growing of fruits is cute
6. quite funny to use fruit as the medium to film an animation
7. I like the lighting, very professional
8. I like movements of the fruits
9. They reversed the video so that it looks like the fruits “grow” from the table. I found it quite interesting.
10. interesting video editing
11. the idea of using fruits to do a stop motion animation is interesting
12. I like the materials of fruits
13. I like the parts of the dragon fruit and the broccoli!
14. Creative

Improvement

1. the light of shooting the animation
2. I think it is great.
3. In later frame, there are 4 fruits goes in circle, but doesn’t know what it means, and I can’t get the idea.
4. The only improvement needed is the blue background which is a bit confusing.
5. The blurry part
6. the background music can be more happy
7. maybe there could be more on the background
8. Try to make a few more slides so that people can clearly understand what is happening.
9. could have more expressive movements
10. The background can change another color
11. More variation in the background

Group 11 – Quarantine Life (11 votes)

Quarantine Life

Good

1. funny collage
2. It is weird but overall very enjoyable, the aesthetic is questionably lovely
3. The use of music and sound effects is interesting.
4. Barbies are creative
5. They use creative way to make different combinations in the images.
6. Realistic
7. The method using photo in digital software is smart
8. the way how they create the animation
9. the theme and content of the video is interesting
10. I think the Mama Mia back ground music quite match the animation style
11. I think this is the funniest one because of their choice of music and the characters in the story. The barbies always have fake smiling faces and they suit the humorous scenes when they are doing something abnormal. I think the collage scenes are beautiful also.

Improvement

1. the transition (the screen and music) could be more natural
2. the music transition is harsh though and there is always room for more funkiness
3. The transitions of music could be improved.
4. Music can be changed into 1 music
5. The connection between different scenes can be better.
6. make it longer, add more detail
7. The story could be more interesting
8. the music disappears suddenly and appears suddenly, if they can use an effect to make the music fade in and out, it will be better.
9. it will be better if the storyline is more clear
10. I feel like the background music switched too suddenly and end weirdly (the sound effect)
11. I think the introduction of the scene of eye ball cutting the onion can be introduced more well as it is introduced quite suddenly.

Group 1 – Life of a Squid (10 votes)

Life of a Squid

Good

1. They put a lot of effort on the paper cutting and it is very beautiful.
2. The story is interesting.
3. the transition of the squid jumping into the water
4. they design many perspectives in their video, which makes the video more funny.
5. great visual effects and creative edits
6. paper cut so beautiful

Improvement

1. the two media can be more merge
2. The story should focus on one material that it will not be strange
3. the light could be improved
4. make the story longer
5. shadow little bit too much but it’s minor 

Group 6 – Fat Choi (7 votes)

Fat Choi

Good

1. the transitions are smooth and the theme is interesting
2. The theme of Mahjong is quite interesting.
3. people develop wonderful imaginations when options are limited, this group has shown that perfectly.

Improvement

1. The animations can put some surprise to make the video better
2. Maybe give more emotion.
3. For audiences who don’t know how to play Mahjong, the storyline is confusing.
4. maybe more movement, i want drama

Group 5 – Tom and His Friend Ant (4 votes)

Tom and His Friend Ant

Good

1. The use of colour
2. One of the reasons is that it is my group work. 🙂
3. I quite like the scene that Tom flying into the kitchen and the scene tears drop to the ground.
4. the paper cut, background and other decoration look good and cute
5. the tearing scene

Improvement

1. As what Peter and Bryan have said, the transition should be more fluent and the ET eyes of the fear scene can get into the screen from the right-hand side to improve coherence. Also, the paper cut of the first scene can be more refined as there are still pencil notes on the paper cuts.
2. the photo can be taken in a better way, like no shadow.
3. the first part is a bit rough

Group 7 – A Little Monster (3 votes)

A Little Monster

Good

1. creative
2. Simple and cute idea especially the green hat

Improvement

1. the plot of the story, the method they use.
2. The consistency

Group 2 – Scoop (2 votes)

Scoop

Good

1. the animated part at the middle
2. simple and clear visual communication

Improvement

1. the characterization of the figures can be more different
2. could have better characterization and expressive design

Group 10 – Snaketory (2 votes)

Snaketory

Good

1. The story line, narrative arc is clear and easy to understand.
2. The drawings and the complimenting music

Improvement

1. some of the scenes can be drawn in more detailed manner

Group 3 – Spicy Swiss Roll is Spinning (1 vote)

Spicy Swiss Roll is Spinning

Good

1. the interaction between the shapes, colors and the real objects.

Improvement

1. could be longer, the transition could be more natural

Group 9 – Hope (1 vote)

Hope

Good

1. I like the style of the character.

Improvement

1. The connectivity should improve.